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Monday, November 3, 2014

Christian Flash Fiction: "it is 2014"

(wc 233)

it is 2014
this the good old united states
women are supposed to be liberated
not submissive or obedient - especially
to some archaic teaching - to Christian thinking.

that’s not what i see
kneeling in prayer
is beauty
is purity
is virtue
towers

a symmetrical row
3 young women
lined up togetherness
in solitary worship and prayer

kneeling on the concrete floor
or even more worn kneelers
their heads are bowed and hands
clasped together
above the seatbacks - like protecting gates
behind which lips dance
in silence
unison found in the practice
of daily prayer

each is a model of modestly - in their dress
they respect their creator - with
a veil in remembrance 

these young women follow
what
the holy spirit tells their hearts 
society
discourages these acts of devotion – yet -
these young women
(some parents little girls)
have found a light of truth
in the midst of darkness
today

3 in beauty
remember
a solitary young girl
bowed down in prayer – she
heard the message Gabriel 
heralded 
the call of God’s spirit

into her purity
the salvation of the world was born

it is 2014
this the good old united states. 
these liberated women
devoted to the One
they truly love
speaking to their hearts
reveals true beauty found in
eyes that sparkle with His fire

Inspiration:
Song of Solomon 7:4 (NLT)
Your neck is as beautiful as an ivory tower.
Your eyes are like the sparkling pools in Heshbon by the gate of Bath-rabbim.
Your nose is as fine as the tower of Lebanon overlooking Damascus.

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